“Jollybean” the Demon

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My daughter “Sham”, eight years old, read my other post “Scary Night”. She liked it a lot and was so amused by it… Today, she came excited with an idea, “Dad, I want you to share my own story with your friends”. She meant my WordPress friends. Since she had shown some special skills in composing stories, I’m here publishing her own story without any alteration – her own English words and style.

P.S., Sham in Arabic slang means Damascus (the capital of Syria)

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“Jollybean” the Demon

By Sham Al Karbi

The men were chatting in the sitting room. Up was a woman with a baby called “Zain”. While the men were chatting, the electricity was turned off and thunder was heard. A demon came in holding a knife with blood and flesh on it. The demon went upstairs knowing the woman and her child was there. The demon threatened her that if she didn’t guess his name in three days, he’ll take Zain her child. The woman was devastated, really devastated, and felt like crying.

The first day, the women thought of every name she knew and told it to the demon. But he just laughed cruelly and went.

Second day, before the demon came, the woman let her husband go to find the weirdest names he ever heard and write them on the paper she gave him. When her husband came back, he told her he didn’t find any name. But on the mountain, in the witch’s forest, he saw a demon near the tinny cottage singing “la la la, my name is Jollybean and the woman will never guess”. The woman clapped her hands happily. But the demon didn’t come because it was raining.

When the demon came back next day, the women pretended that she didn’t know his name. She said, is your name Jolly? Or is it Bean? No, laughed the demon. Then is it Jollybean asked the woman.

WHAT?! Screamed Jollybean and vanished forever because he was frustrated of his situation.

The End

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62 responses to ““Jollybean” the Demon”

  1. -Eugenia Avatar

    Love your story, Sham! 😃

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Me and Sham thank you very much, Franci. We’re very glad to read kind words.

  2. cordovogh Avatar

    Wow…. Simple story with a moral lesson lol… Tell Sham welldone👍

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Me and Sham thank you very much, Cordovo. She is very happy to read this and is bragging about it too 🙂

  3. Benn Bell Avatar

    Sham shows promise

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Me and Sham thank you very much, Benn. Your kind words mean a lot to us and we highly appreciate it.

      1. Benn Bell Avatar

        You are welcome. I enjoy your blog

      2. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

        The pleasure and honor are all mine, Benn

  4. marieryan Avatar

    Sham, thank you for writing that great story. I bet you have some more?
    You are amazing for writing the story in English!

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Me and Sham thank you very much, Marie. Sham is speaking good English considering her age. Thanks to the help of her Mom in this field. Thank you for your kind words and compliment.

  5. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram Avatar

    Superb, fantastic story cute girl. Expecting more from you 🙂

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Me and Sham thank you very much, Subbashini. We are very glad to read your kind words compliment and she is bragging about it.

  6. Iulia Halatz Avatar

    Children’s stories are always worth listening. With their unhampered imagination they see better and farther than us 😊 A very beautiful story from lovely Sham 💚

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Me and Sham thank you very much, Iulia. Your kind words, as always, are highly appreciated and mean a lot. Sham is very happy to read this. 🙂

      1. Iulia Halatz Avatar

        I am sending my warmest wishes! 🙂 And please convey my sincere regards to Sham!

      2. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

        Thank you so much, Iulia. I’ll convey your message for sure. Same to you and your family 🙂

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Me and Sham thank you very much, Darlene. We’re very glad that you like it and appreciate your kind words.

  7. NashwaNader Avatar

    Very nice. I love her name “Sham!” 😊

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Thank you very much, Nashwa, for your kind words. 🙂

  8. Angela Avatar
    Angela

    Well Done Sham! Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Keep it up!

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Sham, her Mom, and me (the Dad) thank you very much, Angela. Your comment means a lot to her and is highly appreciated. I’m sure that she has great teachers at school such as your good self who helped in shaping her talent and enforcing the confidence of herself.

  9. Kally Avatar

    Well written story! I enjoy reading it.

    1. Mohamad Al Karbi Avatar

      Me and Sham thank you very much, Kally. Your encouraging words mean a lot… 🙂

      1. Kally Avatar

        You’re so very welcome!

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